cyzt0769 发表于 2024-3-8 22:43   全显示 1楼
13章看下来酣畅淋漓，不过全篇光肉戏了看到后面也有点腻，后续可以多加些调教和肉体改造的戏份，女角色对儿子的情感和矛盾也可以多写写作为调剂，这样后面再写肉戏肯定会更刺激一些。


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